A-Z essay choice #3

B2 Characters in Collaboration: An Analysis of How Secondary Characters Aid the Development of Primary Characters in Pride and Prejudice

• The title is very clear, no doubt as to what the purpose of the essay is
• The introduction is appropriate
• The sentence structure is clear and the ideas are presented in an easily understandable format
• The body is brief but makes its claim well, using Mr. Darcy as the only person who's being analyzed
• The scope of the overarching theme of introducing characters using other characters is broad but the thesis is directed towards only Mr. Darcy and is sufficiently narrow for me
• This is an overall good essay